...Its something about your coloring...just gets on my nerves...and try and make your drawings more symmetrical like a mirror image of the other half. Why dont you just ink in the lines of your drawing and color it in on gimp?(free photoshop like application)
NO worries! Im 13 too...but the tutorials on this site are very helpful. you can color in shadows better than I ever could...I need some GOOD markers and a pen for inking in so i can practice
hey MBW17, Watch out for the numerous spelling mistakes. If you plan to present something to others, make sure everything is spelled correctly, otherwise it will distract your audience from taking your design seriously.
MBW17.. your doing well for 13 years old. Don't mind what the other 13 year old is 'advising' you to do. Keep doing what you're doing and you should be in good shape when you get to graduating high school.
I agree on the spelling issue. You can just throw your text into word to use spellcheck - easy fix. Your layout could use a few things lining up or some of those pictures being the same width could help make things cleaner. Anyway your technique is coming along, keep up the good work.