Wow! u don't use perspective? :speechless:

BTW, Benza, I never thanked you for pointing that out anyways. Do you think you can show more visuals like that with my recent ones? I just uploaded a super car. Sorry if the visual isn't that great but i use my phone because I don't have a scanner.

....And Here It Is...

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/300/dsc07021wi8.jpg

I saw the rendering/drawing of the Hyundai Genesis and used the techniques in it. That's how I learn, I watch/see. Then everything else is just popping out of my head. Probably need to make the wheels smaller too. The size of your average coupe. Stroke marks were pretty random. BTW, Philippine Jeepney Short Version design has been uploaded.

No problemss.

Ok.. here's what i see in ur recent one...

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/geijutsutekinotenshi/1234.jpg

There're some information... and it might be confusing. But don't mind to ask..

And also, i flip it horizontaly.. so u can see whether ur perspective is right or wrong.

Anw, anyone, CMIIW. I'm still learning too.

I still think the car looks to cartoonish?? And you could give it some more detail, like in the headlights.... Keep sketching!

It does look confusing, what's the 3/4 from wheel base? Distance between the wheels are 3/4 of the wheel base right? The roof, window, windshield design is similar to honda civics which i barely noticed. That drawing was done during the school year, I just didn't gave time lately due to a very packed schedule. Make the car's front end wider right? Well, thanks, I should practice again soon.

appears overlooked to me. leave the rendering aside and focus on sketching more. keep it loose, just draw a lot in various views with some hatching to communicate form or broad marker strokes. this way, you will see your skill improve much more quickly than the pathway you are taking now.

Like don't darken the lines or do any shading? Just the end product before final touches?

hey i like ur drawing renderings and the way how u like those sport compact cars. i too am like u where i draw only those sport type under closed doors like during class time not paying attention, but u should try other types like SUVs u can still make that sporty.

if that doesnt work maybe go for hotwheels designs(if theres such thing lol)?? i dunno but ur cars really look like them and its a good thing

Thanks for the support, CarbonDesigns. You and benza are the only one really helping me out/supporting me. Check out the Philippine Jeepney if you want sporty SUV like. I don't know what came to me but that bus was suppose to be ghetto but I guess I made it really sporty without noticing it.

....and sometimes, smaller is better. Even when it comes to big things, making things smaller reduces weight plus more features and etc. I'm also trying to design a system much like Tesla's roadster. The only problem is all the lithium ion batteries, but I'll find a way for it. For now, still designing a better looking spoiler. As for now, I need to get some crazy ideas together.

Hope it helps..

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o28/geijutsutekinotenshi/121.jpg