wow, thats a lot of lines. anyway. looks ok, but your front wheel doesnt make sense. i see that it's turned, but if its turned, it would be sticking out of the car.. not still tucked under like you're showing. that would mean that if that wheel was straight, it would be recessed under the fender a good 3 or 4 inches.
Originally posted by AMdesign: wow, thats a lot of lines. anyway. looks ok, but your front wheel doesnt make sense. i see that it's turned, but if its turned, it would be sticking out of the car.. not still tucked under like you're showing. that would mean that if that wheel was straight, it would be recessed under the fender a good 3 or 4 inches.
Originally posted by equineR1: [QUOTE]Originally posted by LiGHTWORKEr: Yes, I do have an excellent 'EYE FOR DETAIL'.
I'm simply giving you advice on how to make your drawing look more believable.
You don't want me to pick out EVERY FLAW in your design.
YES I DO want you to point out flaws... thats why i have posted it here dammit, not for passing my time, man.. just point out anything u think its wrong wid it, even if its TRASH according to you.
When you say "work on perspective", please elaborate.. tell me where im right and where im going wrong.. just like the AMDesign guy just did..
technique: rendering style is yesterday. Catchy glass reflections, many cliche'd stuff here (2 pronged side mirror?). I can appreciate the time consumed doing the detailed shading/gradation on every corner and angle, but really, the whole render will look better if you focus ONLY on one or two areas. There is less focus now b/c everything is uniform in technique, value, and color (cool only. where's warm?). The first thing I see is the side mirror and then a lot of creases. Background is boring. overall render looks similar to that of emre husmen's tutorial. what's up with the wheel? why don't you try side view render first?
designwise: very aggressive coupe. Brutal! I like it. I even like the grille and logo. That torquoise green/aquamarine can go to hell. Front air inlets are cool and suggestive BUT: no working bumper???? side profile is sexy sharp, but door lines too low. The whole car is sitting very low. And no! side exhaust on a coupe??? come on. ANd the aftermarket rear wings??
Problem: who want to buy this car and for how much? BTW, the trend of "cute-economical-functional" is now BEATING the "supertuner-sexy-bitch-but-pricey" trend. I'll give you proof. 2008 Yaris vs. 2008 Shelby GT 500. Which one do you think makes more profit?
as for the render, AMH pretty much hit it on the nose. Anyone can spend 3092435 hours rendering each specific piece. And if you're going to do that you still have to give some focus onto a particular part of the car. Even in real life the back part of a car doesn't look as clear as the front does. And if you're going to put in ground/background give some suggestion of a horizon line. Render will look more 'real' if you take away that gradient on the left side of the windshield.
- As everyone has said, wheels; eek.
- Side mirrors are awkward and don't match up.
- Rear spoiler looks like you slapped it on there last minute in 2 seconds.
- Ground reflection; fix it or get rid of it.
- Bottom right 'L' part of the bumper needs to be going upward more.
- Pretty sure the right head light needs to stretch back farther- you have your right wheel fender set higher than your left but the left headlight is higher than the one on the right.
- The inner most vents, directly below them they have a small offset of metal, the one on the right is much longer than the one on the left which is the exact opposite of how they should be considering the perspective.
- With this many lines it's real easy to have things be off..
as for the design; 'Safe' to say that i'd cuz my hand trying to open the door. Not to mention making the body panels with so many ridges would be a pain in the ass. Word on not going the 'smooth-futuristic-lines' of many designs today but WOA.
Rear wheel fender looks out of place; it's too smooth/rounded considering how sharp the lines are on the rest of the car.
I dunno, maybe the weird guy you're about to pwn in Need for Speed 56 will pick this car over an R8?
