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Hi everbody,

This is the link to my protfolio, constructive feedbacks are welcome...

http://www.cardesignnews.com/portfolios/cdn_pf_page.php...geTotal=1&imageNum=1
 
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Come on guys, say something about it?!
 
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ye. like it. the side profile of the fiat is good, as is the front 3/4. im not sure about the rest fo the work, seems to be lacking clarity, detail and originality, but the fiat work is good. is that an alias wire file at the bottom? if so, looks like you know your alias well. nice model. I would develop the fiat project some more as it has masses of potential. good brand analysis.
 
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Thanks for your comments, the FIAT was a project for a nacional contest here in Brazil, so a tried do do a better work. In fact I started to really study the area about 6 months ago, I was almost graduated in another subject, but I just gave up to go to Industrial Design, so whatever I know 'til now I learned on my own, so I'm still improving my knowlwfge and technique.
About the wireframe, it's from the RED S10 LIGHT TRUCK, it was modeled in Rhinoceros. I'm still learning Alias Studio Tools, and I don't have yet enough knowledge to model a hole concept with it.
Now about developing the FIAT a bit more, I'm already doing that, in fact I'm almost done modeling both the interior and the exterior plus some engeneering parts on Rhino again. So I believe you'll be able to see it in my portfolio in few days.

Thanks again for your advice,

R. Pontes
 
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wow. interesting. looks like you know what you are doing. As far as the criticism, I believe currently you are surpassing my knowledge in the area of industrial design for me to give you any viable advice!


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