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Just looking for some constructive criticism. My first vehicle model. IN ORDER TO VIEW THE IMAGE YOU HAVE TO CLICK IN THE ADDRESS LINE ONCE THE PAGE COMES UP. FOR SOME REASON THERE IS A PROBLEM. IT JUST NEEDS TO RELOAD AFTER YOU GET AN ERROR MESSAGE. SORRY GUYS

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Thats Fricken Sweet

 

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i can't speak for everyone else but i dont see anything except an error screen, therefore i can't comment... post when its fixed and i'll come back and look it over and let you know what i think.


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is there another way to post an image here? I just copied a link to a blog image.
 
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ONCE YOU GET THE ERROR SCREEN JUST GO UP INTO THE ADDRESS SECTION AND CLICK ONCE. IT WILL RELOAD. SORRY FOR THE PROBLEM.
 
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It's a nice modelling job, but it's not my favorite design. It's just too sqare and boxy for me.
 
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Thanks for checking it out. I will post more as I create them.
 
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U did a good job of modellin it. as the other guy said not mah favortie design.
 
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Hi
I don't know your name but Loki your General 3D model is good in Designing,But it has 3 main problems in calculating field:

1-Your design is'nt Aerodynamic,as a result it can't be a good design project to produce.I suggest to learn Aerodynamic before your next 3D designs.(You can search in Google about Aerodynamics)
2-The tires are bigger than imagination in your vehicle.
3-The lowest surface of your vehicle is'nt suitable for the vehicle motion,therefore your vehicle has motion problem.

My Email:
Car_amv@yahoo.com


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I have a few more targetted criticisms....but hopefully helpful ones. The body of the car is too much underneath the car. If the car bumps or shakes at all the wheel would collide with the body of the car that's beneath the wheel.

The other thing that would help to communicate your design better is to render it from a different perspective. The angle that you have right now is a bit extreme and doesn't show the actual design off to it's full potential. Try a little bit more of a traditional view and then bump it just a bit to make it a little bit edgy.


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